I can't believe how wonderfully they are doing with how to writing. Well, I can believe it....but it's pretty cool to see! I wanted you to see that we're asking them to add more details. Jenna went back and made her story about how to peel an orange...pretty funny, by warning the reader that you might get a squirt or two in the eye!
You can tell that Nora added some details to her snowboarding story about where you might get a snowboard at!
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